55 Word Story – It’s in the Cards

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“Tarot.  Ace of Pentacles, an opportunity offered,” the metaphysical store clerk explained.

I remembered.  I still carried his star-embossed coin.  Once I shuffled possibilities, dealt answers, and survived by stacking the deck.  He died anyway.

If he had something to say, it was in the cards.  I flipped the coin, then I stole the deck.

Noir #1 – Tia Atwater (Approx. 1500 Words)

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“You got a job?”

I’m startled, dropping my keys on the worn carpet.  When I stand up I’m dizzy from either the sudden movement or the paisley swirls down our apartment hallway.  It’s 7 a.m. and a fair question.  My landlord sidles up and leans casually on the wall between the dusty sconces.

“No.  I’ve got guilt and I’m out of coffee.”

“You’re only two months behind on rent, nothing we can’t handle.”

I step away from my door and onto the creakiest floorboard, “you’re very generous.  Especially to be working so early.  You changing light bulbs?”

The sconce behind him shudders as he pushes off the wall and the light flickers.  “Joseph complains so much.  You know he woke me up when he left at 6:45 this morning.  Told me the screen is broken in the stairwell window.  He was worried about bees getting in.”

I glance down the hall, really needing coffee now, but he doesn’t take the hint.  He’s looking very closely at me, so I stare back hoping he’ll get to whatever it is soon.  For a split second the corners of his eyes squeeze tighter, he doesn’t like my direct look.  Then I see him dismiss it.

He even shrugs a little before saying, “I need you to do me a favor.”

I’m supposed to follow him down the hall and since it’s the way out, I do.  I see the broken screen on the way down the stairs.  The grapevines have taken over the front of the building, tendrils curling through the screen.  It is September and the weight of the thick leaves has finally pulled a gash open.  I fight the urge to touch the invading force of nature.

Dupont stops his descent and points to a first-floor door.  “I was working here when I saw Anna’s door.”

I see it is wide open and the empty threshold feels strange.  I wave my landlord on and take a deep breath.  Focus on Anna.  She’s friendly; we’ve walked back from the bus half a dozen times. The discord of the morning has me tense and when I follow him through her open doorway I feel the inevitable slide of fear down my spine.

“I know you don’t say it, why would you, but I know what you are.  I need you to take the case.  The police don’t get anything right.  She’s deserves more than that.”  Dupont spits the last statement out, white foam at the corner of his mouth from his perpetual cheap mint chewing.

Anna is dead, laid out across her tousled bed the blood dried and dark in her long blonde hair.  I tear my gaze away from her body, gulping at how fast the day has gotten dark.  “Why?  Why me?”

My landlord is agitated, unable to look at her or keep still.  He winces back and forth outside the bedroom door chattering, “someone killed her here in our place.”

“Call the police!”  I croak even as I hear the approaching sirens.

“Tia, please, I know what you are.  Just do me this favor.  Its Anna; its our home.”  My landlord swipes his mouth with a dirty sleeve and nods as if he’s decided for me.

Dupont darts out into the hallway to watch for the police, leaving me alone.  I’m not with Anna.  She’s dead, I’ve seen this before, and there’s nothing human in her cold and hardening leftovers.  No light, no smile, no breath, and no voice calling my name even if I hear it in my dreams and on my worst days.

I’m reeling and tug at my shirt, feeling like there’s a rope cutting off my air, unable to look away.  I fight to keep seeing Anna, to not let Maria’s face appear under her same dark hair.  I force myself to reason; my landlord isn’t trying to torture me.  He doesn’t know.  Dupont brought me in here to help him.  I take three deep breaths and think.

An inappropriate bubble of laughter pops in my throat.  My landlord thinks I’m a private investigator: odd hours, bad company, and admittedly too much drinking.  My friend from college is a criminal lawyer and helped the dude in 4A solve some unfortunate charges.  Cal also knows I’m always up for a drink.  And then there was Logan picking me up for late dates in his squad car.  He did have a couple of cases where my insight shifted everything towards the explanation.

Now I’m dodging into dangerous headspace, the worst symptom of unemployment.  I have nothing to do so naturally I’m casting around for anything I can do.  Like be a private investigator for my landlord in order to make up for two months of late rent.  Except there’s a dead body in front of me, and it’s Anna.  She is, was, two years younger than me.

Why would someone kill Anna?

I start looking around.  She was killed by a heavy blow to the back of her head.  There is nothing near her that could be the weapon, just throw pillows.  From the vivid image of her wound bashed into my mind, I’m looking for something heavy and just more than fist-sized.  Her one-bedroom apartment is hardly bigger than my studio and I stagger around looking for possibilities.

It occurs to me the killer wouldn’t put the murder weapon back neatly and nothing else is disturbed.  Also, I’m not a private investigator and I feel as if flood waters are closing in over my head.  The only thing I can see is that Anna was into Tarot cards.  One whole shelf is stacked with books on the subject with a beaten up notebook shoved in the corner.

I stop and breathe for a second before looking back in her bedroom.  Directly across from her bed, a Tarot card is tucked into a picture frame, covering up her boyfriend.  The Roman numeral VIII is etched at the top in gold and the figure below puts my stomach on ice.  A woman, blindfolded, stands in the middle of eight swords with her hands bound.  The illustrated sky is dark and foreboding.

“Get out, pretend you’re just walking by!”  Dupont appears, snatches my hand, and swings me into the hallway just as the police step up the front doors.  He hits the buzzer and leans on the doorway, blocking my view as I pretend to walk by.

I can’t solve the Tuesday crossword, much less a murder.  The only thought that will form is a blurry eyed memory of the crossword that stumped me a few days ago.  I have to calm down, stay calm so I concentrate on the first clue that stumped me, 23 down: Chaucer’s walking tour.

What kind of clue is that?  I rail inside my head and it has nothing to do with the crumpled puzzle any more.

It doesn’t work when I’m panicked.  I smooth out my breath and settle my face into a blank as I approach the police bottlenecked in our building’s tiny foyer.  I make it through the first set of squeaking doors and past the tight crowd scanning the mailbox names.  Then I’m outside and about to take a deep breath only to be stopped dead on the front steps.

“Tia Atwater.  I forgot you live here.”  Detective Larsen holds up his hands to block my way.

“She just walked past the scene, we haven’t questioned her yet,” a uniformed officer tells him.

“Perfect place to start.  Logan always thought she was a natural detective.  Almost a psychic.”  Then my ex’s old partner turns on me: “so you must have known what your break-up would do.  He got suspended, you know.  And now they’re transferring him.”

A tall, lanky man in a loose suit with a loose smile steps up to us.

Detective Larsen sighs.  “Meet my new partner, Detective Ramirez.  This is Tia.”

Ramirez smiles, this time at me despite recognizing my name.  “I just need to ask you a few questions before you go to work.”

Detective Larsen stops on his way in through the front doors.  “You got a job?  Case closed, boys, it’s the Apocalypse.”

I tell Ramirez that, no, I do not have a job.  I’m just heading out to buy a coffee.  He asks if I know who lives in apartment #209 and I’m honest when I say I only know her first name is Anna.  Then I can’t remember when I saw her last.  Off the bus, walking home, we passed on the sidewalk and she told me school was stressful.  That was maybe two days ago.  She’d mentioned a boyfriend before and seemed happy.  No, she wasn’t worried or scared and I have no idea if there was anyone who disliked her.  Our landlord loved her and checked on her often.   I’m just explaining how all I saw was Dupont standing in Anna’s doorway when Detective Larsen comes back out.

“Victim is Anna David.  Boyfriend’s name is Drew Thompson.  They’re picking him up now.”  He nods to Ramirez before pulling me aside.

“Something’s happened to Anna?”  I realize my eyes are wet when Detective Larsen frowns and loosens his grip on my arm.  I can’t help but reach up to my neck, an old gesture that doesn’t erase the cord marks I’ve seen.

“Anna was struck in the head,” he tells me because he remembers my past.  “It could have been an accident.”

That helps me fight off the dizziness of memories as I take a deep breath to spit out: “liar.”

“We’ll find out who killed her.”  Detective Larsen puts his hand on my shoulder, “Why don’t you sit down for a second.  You look a little pale.  Tia, sometimes we never know why these things happen.”

I slip out from underneath his concern and scowl, “but there’s always a reason.”

“And we, the police, will find out what it is.”  It’s a gentle warning, as irritating as a rock in a shoe.

Dupont’s right, the police will never get it right.

I force my grimace back into a blank face and fake a nod.  Detective Larsen steps aside though he has more to say and I hold my breath as I pass him.

Calm down.  23 down: Chaucer’s walking tour.


It comes to me quick as I break away down the steps.  Chaucer’s walking tour is a pilgrimage.  They walk miles to see the relic of a dead saint, seeking favors, forgiveness, or God.  I walk away too fast down the sidewalk and wonder when I’ll stop.  It should be simple: all I want is a strong coffee and the truth.

Character Intro – Anna Abbey (Approx. 500 Words)

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He had to step aside or she had to go through him.  As he snarled and gnashed his teeth, she considered her options: go home and watch her father play house with his new young bride; sleep in her car for another week; or let the police catch her.  The sirens blared into the parking lot and she took a step forward.

The Rottweiler lifted his lip again.  Seconds later his growl reverberated off the walls, and Anna wondered if she should count like people did between lightning and thunder.  She counted to five and hoped his stormy thoughts passed, hoped the hotdogs in the next aisle over tempted him, but mostly she hoped she had her mother’s stare.  If only Anna could reflect that cold dagger blade look full of insight without empathy, then the hulking dog would back away.

Car doors cracked open and terse orders were called across the parking lot.  Anna was seven feet from the glass case and a few long strides away from smashing her hand into the cause of her nightmares.  She was seconds away from silencing the sickeningly persistent call.

Or getting charged with breaking and entering.  Either or, Anna thought.

“Go home,” she said and realized she was talking to herself instead of giving the Rottweiler a convincing command.

The police were not at the back door yet.  The dog might chase her but Anna could be up the shelf and out the window before he lunged.  People left cars in pawnshop parking lots overnight all the time.  All she had to do was get away and come back in the morning.  The knife would still be under glass, glinting on a swath of green canvas, and tomorrow she could stop the visions it caused.

Anna knew it would not be easy; this object hit hard enough she’d abandoned her regular plan and broke in just to stop it.  The original plan was to buy the knife or at least ask a clerk to open the case so she could hold it.  One touch was usually enough yet here she was ready to steal it as the police shone flashlight beams over her desperation.  If she didn’t get a handle on this one it could carve out her sanity, drive her to suicide like her mother.

Just grab it now, who cares if you get caught? Anna thought.

The Rottweiler flinched away from the glass case as a frightened growl ripped straight from his throat.  It pushed through a rack of military overcoats and disappeared.  Anna knew the police would hear the breaking glass but she raised her fist and ran forward.

The vision slammed into her and knocked her breath out in one sharp cry.  The room went black and Anna fell into unconsciousness without another sound.

Character Intro – Psychometrist (Approx 2000 Words)

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Sybil, a.k.a. Billy, is a character I have been working on for a long time.  She has shown up in different situations and short stories but always with the same strange talent.  Psychometry is the ability to pick up past-life energies from objects.

This began as my entry for the 2012 NaNoWriMo when my first son was only one month old.  Unfortunately, Billy’s full novel did not reach the bench mark of the contest but my eldest son, nicknamed Primo, thrived.  More about Billy soon!  🙂

“I can’t go.”

“Yes you can and we’ll be fine.”

I give my husband, Tommy, a disgusted look to cover up the swelling of desperation I’m feeling.  He’s holding our six-month old son and should realize why I’m so conflicted but he is ignoring it.  “I don’t need to go to a cocktail party and I certainly won’t feel bad about breaking a date with Alan.”

“You were all excited yesterday telling me how you haven’t been to a party in fifteen months because of the little guy.  You were even willing to spend time with Alan again just to get out of the house and have, quote, adult conversations.”

Being quoted back to myself changes my look to a scowl but Tommy is immune and unfortunately right.  I’m overjoyed to be in a little black dress, boots with actual heels, and wearing perfume instead of baby lotion.  Though looking at my two men so cute in their sweatpants, ready for a night of sports highlights and bottle-feeding, I can’t help but want to stay home and revel our family.

Tommy sees this and starts listing my own pros and cons, “frozen pizza versus canapés; talk of headlines, world crises, and careers versus goo-goo and the five hundredth rendition of ‘Twinkle, Twinkle;’ a real cocktail versus juice from a sippy cup; yoga pants versus that damn sexy little dress.”

I smile despite my desperate wish to be two people.  He hands me my little black purse pointing out I can hold it in one hand and not worry about diapers, wipes, or extra onesies.

“Besides you can’t back out now.  Alan’s here.”

Alan rings the doorbell as he opens the door and lets himself in.  It doesn’t matter that he hasn’t seen me in over two years or that he has never set foot in our house.  It feels incongruous, him in his fashionable tight cut suit against our brightly lit entryway with the sky blue walls and light colored wood floors.  The way my life has changed slams home with our heavy front door decorated for fall.  All the flash and freedom of someone with a nightlife standing in front of a coat rack hung with burp cloths and an overstuffed diaper bag.  Still, he comes in already at home despite the cool reception from my husband and gives big hugs and kisses all around.

I’m not prepared for his embrace as he enfolds me in a nightmare flash of someone else’s life.  There’s a sickly fog all around and the muffled yells of men in strange flat-eyed masks.  I’m being shoved out of a trench but am too afraid to stand up.  The crouched man who pulls me the last few inches suddenly slumps over and a dark stain spills onto the ground near my hands.  Terror makes me claw my hands through the dirt, soaking them in his blood, in order to start dragging myself along the ground to the cover of trees fifty feet away.  I’m choking, unable to breathe, wanting desperately to tear the mask from my face but too afraid of the lingering green cloud clinging low to the ground.  The cloud covers me and instinct takes over, I spring to my feet and a bullet bursts through my chest.

Alan doesn’t let me out of the hug right away, holding in me in front of him by my shoulders so he can check my reaction.  I slam a mental door shut on the horror and scan his outfit for any World War II patches, pins, or medals.  He must have a trigger object on him somewhere.  A young solider staggers across my foyer and reaches for our forgotten stack of mail before fading.

“Oh, little family, aren’t you just perfect!  What’s his name?”  Alan doesn’t take his eyes off of me, sure that I saw something.

“His name is Edward, after his grandfather.”

“And what about the short one in footie pajamas?”  Alan’s smile twinkles at me mischievously.

Tommy lets his jaw harden before putting out a firm handshake and saying, “I’m her husband, Tom, and you must be Alan.  I’ve heard all about you.”

Alan lets his left hand flutter over his heart as he shakes my husband’s hand and mugs for me.  Then he sticks his tongue out at Edward and straightens his slick suit with a flourish.  “Yes, yes, evil old Alan.  She just uses me for invitations to the best parties.  It’s not like we’ve known each other for years and practically grew up together.”

“Being neighbors and never speaking doesn’t count,” I remind him.

“We were also lab partners in high school.  Practically simpatico.”

Tommy can’t help but step in, “so how exactly did you two start hanging out?”

“Well, Eddie, let me tell you,” he sidles forward making Tommy frown and Edward giggle, “your mama used to like this wonderful thing called happy hour and for some reason wherever she decided to slake her thirst she would run into her old lab partner Alan.  So we started to meet on purpose and viola: friends.”

“Friends sell each other’s secrets to the highest bidder?”  Tommy asks casually, avoiding my look.

Alan takes stock of my family, reassessing our unit now that he knows I share everything with my husband including my unusual gift, and repeats absently, “yes, yes, evil old Alan.  I sold her secret but I didn’t sell her out.”

“You just made a lot of money off of what she can do.”

“Yes,” Alan flashes a brilliant smile at the room, “so drinks are on me tonight!  Come on, gorgeous, are you still willing to put up with my foibles for a little fun?”

Two years is a long time, I remind myself as I check my short hair in the hall mirror.  Seeing myself here, in our crowded foyer with all the family clutter around me, I am confident I’ve put my past behind me.  I’ve already practiced my plausible story with Tommy two hundred times and now it’s time to try it out on Alan.

“Of course.  Besides, I can’t pick up spirits from objects anymore.  It faded when I got pregnant and hasn’t happened since Edward was born.  Seems to be a common thing to lose your psychic ability as your life changes.”

I kiss Edward’s sweet smelling head and let Tommy’s lips linger on mine, wishing all the while that what I said was true.  The lie is thin protection against Alan’s probing look as he escorts me outside, past the World War II solider forlornly leaning on our mailbox, and out to his waiting car.


“You done good,” Alan says as he turns down his dreadfully hip music and pulls away from the curb.

Seen from the outside the blue suburban house could be anyone’s.  Alan and I could be twenty-two again and I decide to go with the feeling.  Tommy’s right and it has been a long time since I had my body and my time to myself just for a little while and I want to have fun.

“But do I look good too?”  I ask, stretching my nyloned legs out and looking with delight at my high heels.

He laughs, “not only do you make cute babies but your body bounces right back.

“Yeah, well, you didn’t see me in the first few months.”  It is easy to forget how putting on clean sweatpants was a victory; hot coffee was a luxury; and time didn’t signify anything except the countdown to the next feeding.

“Well I hope you don’t mind that I’m not taking you far.  The party is literally at your neighbors.  We could’ve walked but I wasn’t about to scuff my shoes.”

He pulls up and over the hill to the bay side of our neighborhood where the houses jump in price by one million dollars.  San Francisco is a dull smudge of light under the ribbon of fog but the Golden Gate Bridge is bright behind the bulk of Angel Island.

“See,” I tell Alan as I tell everyone who lives in San Francisco, “this is why I live in the East Bay.  We get the beautiful view of the skyline but none of the fog.”

“I like the fog.  It adds the perfect ambiance to my store.”

“Store?  No more eBay?”

He parks the car and comes around to open the door for me.  “An actual store with a window, a sign, and everything.  You should see the display I have up right now: beauty modification devices through the ages.  Looks gorgeously sinister with a little fog in the air.”

Alan’s brand of antiques falls under the label of odd though a more accurate description would be macabre.  He specializes in the Victorian Age and therefore loves San Francisco like no other.

He rings the doorbell of a lodge-style house with redwood siding and winks at me, “maybe if you’re a good little date tonight, I’ll ask Tommy if you can come out to North Beach and play.”

Our hosts are perched on top of the million-dollar bracket of my neighborhood as the wife opens the door and we are immediately treated to stunning views of the bay that span all three bridges: the Richmond-San Rafael, the Golden Gate, and the Bay Bridge.

“Alan it is so good to see you and you brought your friend!  I’m so glad you were able to make it.  Alan says that you are so busy with an adorable family but he was determined to tear you away for tonight.”

“She lives just down the street so I was able to make my extraction on the way here,” Alan pushes me inside as I stiffly realize I have not had to deal with this number of adults in a long time.

“My name is Sybil but everyone calls me Billy,” I manage and Alan beams at me like a proud papa.  “What a wonderful home you have.”

“Thank you, Billy.  Oh, we were just hoping you’d come.  Here let me get you a drink.”

Her enthusiasm has me narrowing my eyes at Alan but he is ignoring me and already mingling through the impressive open concept of the main floor.  Our hostess pulls me towards a kitchen island the size of a Volkswagen where a forest of wine bottles has sprung up amid fields of cheese trays and deep black pools of cavier.

Cavier, I think.  How Tommy will laugh.  For a minute I ache over the image of my darling husband and baby son enjoying their frozen pizza and bottle together on our saggy couch, but the first sip of a peppery Cabernet of unconceivable price range brings me back to the party.

“My name is Maria and that man with the round glasses by the window is my husband Xavier.  We met Alan at a flea market.  Xavier was looking for a gift for his youngest brother who just passed his medical boards and Alan had a perfectly hysterical collection of medical devices.”

“I can imagine what he sold you.  Was it a stainless steel liver stimulator or perhaps a tonic made of strychnine?”

Maria laughs, “something perfectly horrific that his brother displays in his office.  Oh dear, please excuse me, there’s the doorbell again.”




Character Study – Noir Tarot Reader (Approx. 800 Words)

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I opened another beer first, empty-stomached and alone, and then turned to the tape-entombed moving boxes.  Maybe that’s why the top box tipped off the tall stack and sent a suicide splatter across the studio apartment floor.  I couldn’t believe it was anything but an accident, even though I felt the fall coming and stepped back, sloshing beer down my shirt.

Two funeral prayer cards, a handful of unused candles, a jar of collected sea glass, and my crumpled college diploma skidded to a stop by my feet.  I stepped over them as if those memories didn’t stick to my soul like spat-out gum.

The rest of the knickknacks were equally barbed but I felt better digging in the toppled box.  If this was that box then I knew I’d stashed a little marijuana in an old mint tin.  I swiped past used concert tickets, faded photographs, and all the flotsam of what was supposed to have been a good time.

Then I touched it.

The deck was larger than regular playing cards, wrapped in a silk scarf, and tied with a black ribbon.  The tight knot slipped as I plucked the Tarot cards out of the box with shaking hands.  There wasn’t any furniture in my empty shell of an apartment, so I sat on the scarred hardwood floor, kneeling painfully as penance.  Elephants paraded across the patterned silk and trampled into my lap.

“Only one way.”  I muttered.

Salt, now worn to dust, shook free of the scarf and a sliver of selenite clattered to the floor.  The cards slipped free in my hands and I fumbled through the memorized symbols.  One glance told me the shadow was still there, insistent on the face of certain cards.

“Of course.”  I snarled then switched to a mocking impression: “’You can’t outrun your shadow.’”

I strangled the Tarot deck, still angry at such condescending wisdom.  Moving back to my old neighborhood had been a mistake.  He was too close and it was only a matter of time, but I had nowhere else to go.  I couldn’t afford to run again.

The battered Tarot deck twisted and shuffled in my hands.  It felt, as always, that another stratum of my brain took charge, too eager to talk through the archetypal cards.  The edges of my vision darkened and all the nearby electro-magnetic frequencies increased their pitch.  My stomach churned and it took all my strength to uncurl my fingers and deal the cards.

The traditional spread took shape face down on the floor.  The shadow appeared, scattered at first, and then slipping into one mass on the back of the first card.  My body was stony, refusing to stretch my aching legs, while my mind thought now was a good time to run for the door.  Instead, I knelt outside the sunshine cast through my dirty third story window and stared at the shadowed Tarot card.  All my focus and threadbare faith couldn’t erase that ominous mark.  I held my breath.  Down in the neglected courtyard the dried leaves of an elm tree rattled.

“You’re long gone.”  I hoped aloud.  I had to try.

That rattle of leaves like a dying breath and then still silence.

I turned the first card and scrambled to my feet.  Stiff-legged I paced the far end of my five hundred square foot studio until the card’s familiar face cornered me.  There was no escape.  There had never been a chance for me.

The Tarot card held up two fingers, an insulting salute reminding me that higher powers held sway.  Powers he could harness; powers he had cursed on me.  If I bowed my head and bought in, then all my pain would slowly seep away.

“Stalker,” I hissed at the Hierophant.

I paced the short empty space again and again, sometimes giving the familiar card my own one-fingered gesture.  The rest of the spread didn’t matter.  It would be nothing but a series of failures and repeats.  Unless I faced him, I would stay stuck and I had promised myself no more wallowing.  That’s why I had returned and rented this ridiculously small apartment.  Seeing Jeremy was a necessary evil.  I shoved aside the rest of my unpacked boxes and grabbed my jacket.

On the stairs, I yanked my scarf out of my pocket.  I looped it over my head, jogged down the three flights, and then tucked it tightly over my heart.  It burned a hole in my chest how Jeremy was the undeniable reason I was in Uptown.  I pushed open the apartment building door and took a deep breath but the fresh air didn’t sooth me.  As much as I wanted to flee in the opposite direction, I headed up the block towards his shop.  At least Jeremy was better than some of the things I had left buried when I ran away.




Cute Meet – Paranormal (Approx. 1500 Words)

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Meeting in the Mirror

The open door wasn’t an invitation; it was a gate to hell decorated with cheap orange streamers.  A chill wind sent papery leaves past my rooted feet and over the welcome mat before me.

“You said you’d come.  You can’t back out now,” Ronnie said.

She was right and I hated her for it.  The same way I hated her determination to meet someone new.  If she hadn’t bribed me, I would have stayed at home.  I scowled down at my new necklace and followed Ronnie into the party.

The wind shoved the door and I grabbed the swinging handle.  It slammed shut before I could stop it and everyone turned to see who would make such a dramatic entrance.  I gave them all a limp wave alone; Ronnie was already at the punch bowl ladling through drifts of dry-ice.

I paused on the polished step between the elegant foyer and the party.  The lovely old home’s tin ceiling was obscured with black balloons and rubber bats.  Masking tape marred the gleaming hardwood floor with the crude outlines of bodies.  I moved down into the living room, glad to be out under from the many-faceted menace of the old crystal chandelier.  Beneath all the tacky terror, the Victorian’s gothic spirit still stirred.

“Try not to look so horrified,” Ronnie said.  She handed me a plastic cup of bloody red punch.

“I am not in the mood for this,” I told her.

Ronnie flipped her spider-flecked hair.  “You’re always so edgy on Halloween.”

I clutched my tiger’s eye pendant and tried to mingle.  I felt something bad was coming but I forced the premonition down.

The hostess, Tanya, popped up in front of me with a sickly sweet smile.  “Kiara!  Nice to see you.  Is Mike with you?” she asked.

“We broke up,” I said.

Tanya patted my arm with weak sympathy.  “That’s too bad, but I’m sure you’ll meet someone tonight.  I’ll be your fairy godmother!”

I cringed at her sudden determination and pulled back to avoid the pointy end of her glittered wand.  “No, thanks.  I actually think I might be cursed.”

“My cousin is in town; you should meet him.”  It was obvious Tanya was hell-bent on setting me up.

“I’m not really ready— “

“Nonsense.  You’ll love him.  He came up with a great party game for us to play.”  Tanya clapped her hands and called the attention of the party.  “Listen up, everybody.  Kiara is going to test out our first Halloween superstition.”

An unraveling mummy handed Tanya a jack o’ lantern full of folded scraps of paper and stayed to give me the creeps.  Tanya poked her costumed cousin towards me, accidentally tearing some of his loose toilet paper wrappings with the end of her wand.

“Some people believe that if you look into a mirror while walking downstairs, you’ll see the face of the man you’re going to marry,” Tanya informed the party.  “Ready to test it out?”

Ronnie saw I was the volunteer and she clapped the loudest.

Tanya vamped for the crowd, disappeared down where the ornate bannister was wound with cheap spider web cotton, and then she jumped up with a silver hand mirror.  “Boo!”

The partygoers laughed and, when our hostess held the mirror out so everyone could see it was real, the crowd cheered again.

I had no choice.  I climbed to the top of the stairs, past an oil-painted portrait of Tanya and her family, and turned around.  The foot of the stairs was crowded with gossipy ghouls and I was annoyed at myself for trying to fit in.

I saw my own skeptical expression in the silver hand mirror and then a spark of light from my tiger’s eye pendant.  My feet started to descend but my eyes were transfixed on the mirror.  A man’s surprised smile glinted at me from its surface and I stumbled on the last three stairs, and crashed onto the floor of the foyer.

He was still smiling when I pried my eyes open.

“Am I dead?” I asked him.

“You can’t die of embarrassment,” he said.

He reached out a steady hand and pulled me up to sitting.  I let go to untangle my long, black dress and he disappeared.

“That was hilarious!” Tanya howled where he had been standing.  “And I got it all on my phone.  Hang on, I’m posting it right now.”

Ronnie shoved her aside and yanked me up.  “Are you all right?  What did you see?”

“Just the portrait on the wall,” I muttered.  “Her brother, I think.”

“You mean my brother Craig?  Speak of the devil,” Tanya held up her ringing phone, “Craig’s calling right now.  My brother’s driving all the way from Chicago tonight.  I’ll have to post your video later.”

“Craig’s cute,” Ronnie said, peering up the staircase at the portrait.

“Nice smile,” I agreed.

Ronnie blinked, then pointed up at the portrait.  “He’s not smiling.”

The party moved back into the living room and left me clinging to my friend.  I knew the face I saw, Craig’s face, had not been painted, it was real in the mirror.  It made no sense and I searched desperately around the room for an explanation.

“No, stop messing with me,” I dropped Ronnie’s arm.  “He’s right there.”

Tanya’s older brother, Craig, stood by the bay window in the front of the house, just a few steps from where a knot of partygoers read the instructions for an Ouija board.  He could have easily slipped in during the confusion of my crash.

“There’s no one where you’re pointing,” Ronnie hissed.

Craig’s forehead wrinkled with confusion.  Behind him the glass was slashed across with trees and streetlights.  They sped by as our eyes met again and he disappeared.

“Did someone spike the punch?” I asked.

Ronnie looked at her empty cup, then finished the one she had been holding for me.  “Just in case,” she said.

I forced a laugh and let her lead me to a refill.  I must have bumped my head when I sprawled into the foyer.  I pressed my cold punch cup to my forehead as the rest of the group ringed around Tanya and her next victim.  Her cousin fumbled to get his mummy-wrapped fingers on a small planchette next to her glittery purple manicure.

“Oh, great spirits, tell Edward when he’ll meet his love,” Tanya intoned.

The first ring of spectators called out letters as the planchette skidded itself across the Ouija board.  “F-A-L-L.”

“Ooo, like right now,” one of Tanya’s friends cooed.

“Fall in love,” another interpreted.

Eyes flew to me and looked for a love connection tying me to Tanya’s toilet-paper wrapped cousin.  I held my breath.  Luckily the crowd groaned in disappointment as the planchette moved on and spelled a different message.

“Fall asleep?”  Ronnie put it together then gave me a questioning glance.

I tried to answer even as my head tipped back against the bookshelf behind me.  My eyelids dropped and I felt my mind dip into a doze.  Just as I struggled to gather back my unraveling consciousness, I saw him.

“Hi,” he said with a curious arch of his eyebrows.  Craig shifted his elbow to the window and drove with one hand as he studied me in the rearview mirror.  “I’ve seen you before.  Who are you?”

“Kiara,” I said.

“Kiara, what are you doing in the backseat of my car?”

“I’m not in your car.” I gripped the leather of a car seat.  “You’re driving.  I’m at your sister’s party.”

“And, what?” Craig asked.  “I’m dreaming?”

His car drifted over the rough strips of the road’s shoulder, but he kept his eyes on me in the mirror.  I felt the wheels swerve away from the paved road just as Ronnie tugged on my arm.  Tall grass slapped his front bumper as his tires skidded along the edge of a sharp ditch.

“Wake up,” I screamed.

A backlash of shrieking partygoers ripped me from my trance.  It was my scream that had frightened them.  Tanya, her wand clutched against her chest in fright, couldn’t believe I had outdone her on the cheap scares.  The other guests laughed in relief and went off in search of refills and snacks.  Tanya stood up, her purple glazed eyelashes snapping at me.  Just as she lifted her warped wand to curse me, there was a heavy knock on the door.

“Tanya, the police are here,” her mummified cousin called.

“Everything’s fine,” Craig claimed as he walked in, holding an icepack to his forehead.

The taller officer cleared his throat.  “Fell asleep at the wheel.  Totaled his car, but he’s all right.  Lucky guy.  He woke up just in time to slam on the brakes before the the river.”

The police officers gave him another warning before they left.  As soon as the door was closed, Tanya slapped her brother’s shoulder with her broken wand.  “Had to make a dramatic entrance.”

“Nice to see you again,” Craig said to me.  His forehead wrinkled but he smiled.

Tanya paused.  “Have you two met?”

I shrugged and gave a clumsy explanation.  “I’ve seen you before.  In the portrait on the stairs.”

“In the mirror,” Craig corrected me.

Tanya’s face went pale as Craig took my hands and drew me close.  “Thanks, Kiara.  You saved my life.”
















Tarot Story: Draft #7

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Tarot Stories are comprised of three cards I do as a special inspiration pull.  I then craft the cards into the characters and/or events of a short story.  See if you can guess the Tarot cards before you scroll to the end of the story!

High Priestess Happy Hour

She tipped the glass before the bartender could pour.  Too many drinks, too many wishes missed, she couldn’t stomach another sip.  The breaking stemware sparked a flash of blue in the bottles behind the bar, her synesthesia winking sharply.

The bartender went for a rag and she squinted where the fading flash touched a curve of clear glass.  If it was going to happen again at least she wasn’t alone.  She’d been wrong about the drinking, it hadn’t blurred out the odd trick of her eyes, and she still couldn’t face the wide darkened windows of her attic apartment again.

This was different, she hoped.  Just a trick of the light.

She stared into the bottle and the inverted image showed the framed vintage ad behind her.  The bar’s icon, a blue-shrouded seated nun, was gloriously upended and looked more like the boastful queen stuck in a starry throne than a studious devotee.

She thought about her own lack of spiritual discipline as she clung to the bar stool.  When the room stopped it’s slow spin her sight changed.

Her shifting eyes found the same bottle but now the blue folded into curtains that gave way to a door.  She reached for the brass door knob.  It was cool, cold enough to sting her fingertips, and she pulled back from the vision to see blood on the bar like a red flag.  The small cut sobered her and she clutched a cocktail napkin.  At least she didn’t have turquoise blood or something weird like that.  No one had to know what she saw.

The bar had filled up since she sat down and now it was crowded with comparisons to distract her.  The man with the Mercedes keys made more money.  The woman wearing pearls had better taste in wine.  The slouching man in the gray suit dedicated long hours to his career.  Who was she?

The word ‘clairvoyant’ made her cringe.  That’s why she’d spent all day looking up that other fancy word, synesthesia, but the colorful little glints of sound were not what made her want to drink to blackout.  Maybe she was just lonely.  She should get another drink, meet someone, and not worry about when or where she went to bed and what little flashes she saw along the way.  She could face her apartment again in full sun and forget that what she saw there might be something else altogether.

Indecision made her hands erratic, like flies over the broken wine glass.  The bartender swept up the shards into a trash bin and took her waving to mean she did not want another drink.

What did she want?  The secret hope for a super-power, the longing for a special talent, had always been there but now it had soured.

The man next to her held out a plastic sword stuck with garnishes.

“For me?”  She muttered.

His head was turned away, concentrating on clearer voices, but the sweet offering was obvious.  She steadied her hand, cleared her throat, and took the cherry on top.

“Thanks,” she said.  “You read my mind.”